Thursday, January 18, 2007

superfluous and verbose.

your titles are
too long.

you keep on missing garbage night
in your mind

you forget to throw
your
waste
to the curb

you recycle all of your ideas
with different words
everyday,
placed in a different order

express the same meanings. Over and over. Again and again.

you hide
behind syntax n' structure

when you write in maths
you are only writing for yourself

expect no one to understand you

or else

you could
use the words
of a five year old

to express a twenty five
year old idea

so that we could all feel it.

reading you
is like
trying to
keep my head above
water

you know who you are.

it's not you, it's me.

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